So far, this book is pretty good. The characters are engaging. Id suggest the Author use italics for thoughts and not quotation marks. Usually quotations denote speech. Otherwise I getting pulled into the story. Oh, and more character description would be good. The scenery is described very well, but the people aren't.
Sierra Christenson
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LIKEthank you! sadly the program my publishing company uses doesn't allow for a different font like italics, so the singel (') is all we could do. I also had a limited amount of words I could use so I couldn't flesh the story out like a normal novel, but possibly in the future if I make it into print! thank you for your insight!