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Jasonenrick
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Ok, I quickly changed my mind here. Quality 4 - Stars because I believe it to be decent enough in Spanish but I am not fluent in Spanish or can even speak it so I have to use a translator and this doesn't make things easier! Story Development is 1 - Stars because while I absolutely loved the introduction and the beginning, it doesn't get better. It solely gets more and more confusing with things happening that have no explanation or even a hint that the author may have thought about it because the Story seems to me as if the author randomly thought of things and wrote them down them without thinking! Man, that was a lengthy sentence! Character Design 2 - Stars. I have no idea what he is thinking or have any idea what his personality is like. At the beginning of the Story, he sounded genuinely cool and badass. But after a few chapters, he seems like a Chaotic Evil Mc that wants to kill everybody and anything to get more points. I understand the Orcs and I would understand your enemies but......anyway. Confusing as hell! Update Stability 5 - Stars as of now but that will and I know it, change in the future. World Background 1 - Star. the WB isn't assessable to the readers and randomly things get added( Feels like to me )! Also, you have no concept of powers because Spartans apparently are better than anything and everything! One trows a spear at a magician that embodied a Shield with his magic but the spear just how to throw the shield and kills him as it the spear was thrown by a God that magic couldn't resist or the spear itself was a divine item when in reality it is a bronze spear more likely because Spartans didn't have proper equipment in their age! I mean, the people living in this World have mithril and other OP steal and you go and want to make us clear that bronze is OP, laughable!

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