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KaoriMinLv14yr
2021-02-16 13:55

Too many side events...strong start....super drawn out scenes...its the dragon ballz of romance...most of the story could have been summarized. Reminds me monogatori..narrator that loves to hear himself narrate...

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I agree. Xincerely is an interesting writer with great potential but i feel she throws too much into the mix a lot of times. I keep reading her works though, hoping she grows into the awesome writer that she could be.

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