KaoriMin

The scenes and visuals are interesting. the story keeps me engaged .I love how deep the couples love for each other is.great job and with only 2 chapters ..

Too many side events...strong start....super drawn out scenes...its the dragon ballz of romance...most of the story could have been summarized. Reminds me monogatori..narrator that loves to hear himself narrate...

The *** scenes are boring...there's no adventure...the words used like core..manhood..rammed..plow..are not sensual at all.