Other Name of Fanti - "Nie Li and his servants" Beginning good but, I do not like the main hero of the servant [img=faceslap] half of the fanfiction is copy paste and the relationship between the characters is not disclosed.

It's a good fanfic, but it has a very annoying flaw that prevents me from giving it 5 stars. From time to time it seems that the author is too lazy to write or something and just edits the original material. Nie Li has been having so much presence that he is becoming the MC of the fanfic. Scenes like the alchemist exam by Nie Li that should be summarized or skipped are being copied and pasted in full in this fic and this kind of creates redundant chapters for those who read the original material. This fic seems to be more about the changes that the presence of Tatsuya and Miyuki cause Nie Li rather than about them in TDG (Sorry for any erros, i used google translator)

I really enjoyed the whole thing. Many are angry that mc is allowing nie lie to take the same objects and rewards he got the last time abd that he is his dog.... thats BS. Tatsuya and Miyuki made their own progress and find their own heavely treasures, the treasures linked to nie lie sre tied to his destiny to become stronger, and taking those out is nerfing tatsuya and miyuki best ally and friend. There is nothing wrong with leaving stuff for your allies. A good example would be the nightmare pot to fuse spirits... does it matters if nie lie has it if both also get the benefits? Shadow spirit... none of them can use it then why are they upset that nie lie took it? Ridiculous xd.... meeting the fire goddess.... taatsuya left the laws and the blacksrping for nie lie to loot as adviced by the system, which is the pivot point of nie lie getting the laws he need while tatsuya gets the goddess.... fair traide xd. Now... the grammar is 8-9/10. Story line is better thsn the OG and i like that tatsuya and miyuki powered up glory city A LOT, a thing that nie lie never did as much as he should. Only thing, i would like more world baclground, explanations, more details in characters and surroundings descriptions. So far to understand this FF you must have read the OG. And this puts new readers in a hard spot. So pls make it so that they understand as i have no doubt.... everyone iz here for Oni-sama! And miyuki

I don't how a story can be so interesting yet so rage inducing. This is the first time i was so conflicted when giving rating. The reason is that nie lie really takes the spot light from them. He is more experience have great techniques, gets all the treasures, gets ye ziyun, gets support from the siblings where as tatsuya and miyuki are just there to look mysterious to nie lie. I mean come on!! i get that you help him once or twice but here they are really pampering him because there useless system gave them mission "help nie li" talking of system it is totally useless power it gives is nearly useless and most of them just nerf tatsuya. why give so importance to nie lie it just makes the siblings look useless can't they survive without nie lie why must their survival depend on him. Every time they see a treasure it's like "Nie lie do you want it?" nie lie like the greedy little kitten always replies " yes " even when he got all the previous treasures and the system is like "help nie lie (4/?)". Why even go through all the adventures and chapters when everything goes to nie lie? And tatsuya is just like take the treasures but keep our secret *facepalm* Though if you are a nie lie fan or just reading for the sake of it like me it is a good read,

Very underatted fanfic,this deserve more viewer,good story, good character development, the interaction between the MC and other characters feels real

The harem tag is a lie. It was decent once you get past chapter 25 but the background plot with the MC's emotions is just tiresome. Even past 25 the constant deference to Nie Li is frustrating but the fic pretty much died in the later chapters when the MC is pretty much crazy bipolar with massive moodswings. He fucks some women but there's no feelings to it and the waifu resents it. Honestly just a tiresome read that makes you feel unsatisfied at the end. Also the harem is a big fat lie, pretty much false advertising.

well just read upto 14 chapters and I can it sucks. majority of contents are straight up copy and paste from the original....I was hoping there would be some changes so I kept on reading that whole damn thing just to get disappointed. The characters so far are pretty frickin one dimensional. The system is a BS that basically tells this "supposedly MC" to be Neili's bitch. Character development is close to none existent since this is straight up following canon.

My fellow writers won't drop. But after reading this I understand a little about why readers give my novel a small rating. For the author of this novel, if you want to make a connection with Nie Li, you shouldn't mess with Nie Li's plot and just change a few stories about Nie Li. If you continue to do what you are doing now, you better not fixate on Nie Li from the start and distance yourself from Nie Li or you can make the MC disagree about Nie Li and make the MC better known.

I want to support the author of the reviews. The fanfiction is very good, it consists in good writing and plot. It is easy and relaxed to read. No need to rack your brains while reading. The main character is smart and not beta, this is also a big plus. The harem is not here for show, it is funny and it develops. That makes me happy too. The characters are not wooden like in some Chinese novels. My advice to you if you didn't like something in the initial chapters, read on. They are pretty good. Don't be narrow-minded and biased. The fact that the main character helped Nie Li at the beginning will be explained in the new chapters quite logically. I want to say thank you to the author for good fanfiction. Don't waste your time for bad reviews. You write well. Good luck writing.