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DreamCrusher101
DreamCrusher101Lv53yrDreamCrusher101

Your mc so fucking dumb he is full of shit he is just have been beaten up and he still want to go the skill and then what miraculously the mc will be able to fight back because of course of the plot armor wht cant your mc just go solo if others can do jt why cant he he is childish and for my own information their are more chances of the child being a psychopath if he experience something like the mc have gone throug and not like your mc he even have enough gut to go to school like their is nothing have happen to him dumb piece of shit of a author just die your story doesnt even have a shred of sense of reality

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Jhkari_Peabody
Jhkari_PeabodyLv4Jhkari_Peabody

Great book

Romeru
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The_actually_Guy
The_actually_GuyLv1The_actually_Guy

hey author kun, don't worry about hater like him that don't make sense, they only have a day to live after they post this after which they'll be found murdured by me

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The_actually_Guy
The_actually_GuyLv1The_actually_Guy

F*CK YOU YOU SHIT HEAD, what's your reason again 1) he is childish answer: he is a gosh dang sixteen years old, and you asked why he attended the academy even though he was tortured? well for one it's a chance to escape a f*cking junkyard of a home with his dad molesting and torturing him there and in the academy he could finally have a chance to turn his life around 2) he can fight back because of plot armour answer: plot armour is a major part of every dang story and ummm.....he never fought back except against his father and that was because he gained a new ability 3) why can't he go solo....? answer: Da fuq do you mean by that....of you mean he shouldn't have friends, he actually was weary of beatrice before talking to her and also he never had any friends except Andrea for 16 years, why the hell would he miss up on that chance HONESTLY JUST SHUT UP WITH BASELESS ACCUSATIONS AND ACT LIKE YOU ARE ANALYZING THE STORY WELL WHEN IN REALITY.......ITS JUST BULLSH*T

hostile_fire
hostile_fireLv13hostile_fire

why don't you go ahead and die, I'm pretty sure nobody would even show a pinch of emotion about you, nobody cares about your opinion or better yet... yourself. get your ugly , stupid, lonely ass presence of this app, you make me want to vomit

SomePerson
SomePersonLv3SomePerson

I'm going to give a five start review to spite this one. But it was entertaining!

Josh_Williquette
Josh_WilliquetteLv14Josh_Williquette

Reported for personal attack violating the terms and conditions.

crimsoncalamity
crimsoncalamityLv3crimsoncalamity

Fuck you, ya dang cunt, I hope you don't live a happy life, get you sorry ass outta here if you can't appreciate it you degenerated piece of dog shit

Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4Snoodle_Booper

I know I'm bad at writing but holy shit how can anyone understand the garbage this guy wrote? wtf is this dude on about...

Demelios
DemeliosLv14Demelios

Hum even if I'm totally against what the guys said your not better. Threatening someone by saying that you will kill them is illegal.

The_actually_Guy:hey author kun, don't worry about hater like him that don't make sense, they only have a day to live after they post this after which they'll be found murdured by me