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Fnatic_Fan
Fnatic_FanAuthor4yr
2020-12-09 15:42

Author here, wouldn't recommend I only write for fun, and I might drop this incase I lose the motivation to write. Don't get too invested First time novel, and can't write a good 18+ ch even if you paid me

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Cethal
CethalLv4

Hey man, I just wanted to let you know that you shouldn't feel pressured to put out chapters or anything, you don't have an obligation to any of us. Fwiw tho, I think you're doing a great job and I enjoy this novel/your style immensely! (And I have definitely read waaaay worse r18 chapter than yours lol)

PlusEighTeen
PlusEighTeenLv4

you have good writing, no need to worry about release time. do it when you feel to.

DaoisthcgFqj
DaoisthcgFqjLv15

Dont give up, i think youre doing a great job!

Flamableslug
FlamableslugLv15

I love the novel and the way the plot flows feels kinda natural instead of being extremely forced

BukanMagus
BukanMagusLv3

Best novel, i love ****** mom-shota😭

Morgo
MorgoLv12

But, your novel is great [img=recommend]

Colt_Meredith
Colt_MeredithLv15

Just do your best

DarkestOne
DarkestOneLv3

I don't really see anything wrong with your novel... the r-18 chapters are hot, and thus, nothing wrong. 😋

Dereru
DereruLv13

One of the best R18 novel, just take your time and we’re here to support you

SCP_0999
SCP_0999Lv4

don't give up the novel instresting.

Error_4
Error_4Lv14

It's not good to be overly humble,dont look down on your own work .

MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

your first time is already this good

MHShiro
MHShiroLv4

Don't worry about it, you're doing great 😊

egg_tart
egg_tartLv14

i appreciate the humbleness and i think this is too good of a story to give a 1 star. even though i know it comes from my own humble opinion as well as others who have all rated this highly i think this is well deserving of 4.5+ star rating and i dont think you should put yourself down saying your cant write r-18 as it felt wholesome that i didnt regret a single moment of reading your novel. please i hope you read this and realise a lot of people while would love more, it is surely because what we have is so good so don't feel pressured and end up releasing stuff that is not the gem we have but don't deserve because this could truly be an amazing read and i wouldn't want that spoilt just to negatively affect your health especially when it is all free. i am also sure that quite a few people would pay for advance chaps on pa/treon if given the option so if you want you could still monetise this

Shygirl5700673
Shygirl5700673Lv1

Its sad that you may give up the novel but I understand Auther

Error_4:It's not good to be overly humble,dont look down on your own work .
RedClover
RedCloverLv13

Best novel I've read in a long time. I just binged the whole thing in one go. Don't be hard on yourself

Alusec_BR1
Alusec_BR1Lv10

man, your base, I think that regardless of what you write I’ll like it, just things like ntr that I won’t like outside this all right can go on

LemonSenpai_
LemonSenpai_Lv14

author plss keep posting more chapters, tho I hope you post much more chapter each week cause I can't stop reading this work of your. That's all keep up the good work author!👍

Cinque_39
Cinque_39Lv11

Loving the novel

_Junior_H
_Junior_HLv13

please don't I'm going to get depressed and cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭

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