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what can I say? well written, even better than most current original fictions here. such a quality for a fanfic. good job
How would they know if the sword does not fit him? Are they combat expert already. So confusing
Well written on par with good korean novels. You'll never guess that this came from this AI slop, bad writers of a site.
so boring, its really interesting to hashiramas power to this world. but hes just harems left and right like a pokemon. his adventure is just stealing plots from luffy like many other one piece fics. nothing interesting.
AI, it's so obvious bro. I've read a lot of asioaf fanfics you cannot fool me. The dialogues here too good,by what I mean is every characters tries to talk very deep. why even bother uploading if you'll just upload AI's work.
after a long time, first fanfic Ive seen that is not written by AI. Then is actually good pacing, dialogues and many more that is very pleasing to read.
So much nonsense. 17 and starting highschool? Dialogues doesnt flow naturally, it feels like they are prompted like a robot, probably using AI. Pacing is horrible
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It doesn't even make sense, this is why I rarely a serious novel in this site but mostly fanfic. Authors doesn't think, research. So expensive here and its full of nonsense.
I'm confused by your writing style or specifically the way you write your dialogues it keeps changing. Can you stick to the most common style? ` ` for thoughts, " " for the actual. please?