I really, really like this story. That said, I have several things that I feel need to be mentioned:
1. The author has abandoned this story and there has not been any updates in almost HALF A YEAR!
2. I feel is unfair for Webnovel to promote a story that has been abandoned or does not update.
3. As I mentioned before, the story is really good, the characters are solid, and the concept is fresh, but the writer does not read her own writing prior to posting. As a consequence, there are several parts where there seems like entire chunks are missing. Sometimes you just ask yourself "What happened?" Or wonder if the author meant to say something and left it open. This makes it very confusing and it brakes the sequence of the story.
4. This story has the potential of being one of the BEST stories of this website. HOWEVER, the lack of care from the writer to update, check for mistakes, missing pieces, and most importantly, NO UPDATES IN ALMOST HALF A YEAR, make it difficult to continue to support this book. If updates where at least once a month, then maybe it would be worth it, but as it stands, I am seriously considering deleting this from my reading list. I will wait for the 6 month mark and if nothing changes, then sadly I will have to say goodbye to this.
5. I do not mind waiting for a good story, but not for this long, and not for a story where the writer does not care for her own work by making sure that at least it is written and reviewed before posting.
My advice for the writer: Re-read every chapter and figure out what parts are not clear, and what is missing out of a scene or dialog. If necessary, rewrite and post updated chapters and fix the parts that seem ambiguous.
Pay attention and appreciate your readers, people in this site can be extremely generous, but please don't take anyone for granted and don't string everyone into believing that you care more than you really do not only for this story, but for those who take the time to read and follow.
Life in the real world can be really though, and we all understand. So if you no longer have the time or inspiration to continue, we can understand; but please be honest and set the story as "On hold", or remove it altogether rather than make others believe that everything is fine.
You have the potential to be an excellent writer. Your ideas are good and original, but I would hope that you make an outline of where this story is going to be moving towards, and work from there. Write several chapters ahead of time and let the readers know that updates will be every week, 2, or even every month. Just don't keep everyone hoping and waiting by dangling a carrot in the shape of an update just to keep us here.
I wish you the best of luck and hope that you will become a more active writer and prove to everyone (including me) that you truly care not only for this story, but for all the readers who have spent time and money to invest in you and this story.
