Review Detail of Faysal_Ahmed_5058 in Rise of King Arthur
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Hello, author here. First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me. I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find. For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future. Have a nice day.
Rise of King Arthur
Faysal_Ahmed_5058
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Even if the novel's story is not unique, it can be changed in the future chapters, his writing will grow and if he has some time, he can rewrite his old chapters, just like what Master Oogway said, Oogway: “Look at this tree. I cannot make it blossom when it suits me, nor make it bear fruit before its time… No matter what you do, that seed will grow to be a peach tree. You may wish for an apple or an orange, but you will get a peach. Shifu: “But a peach cannot defeat Tai Lung!” Oogway: “Maybe it can… If you are willing to guide it, to nurture it. To believe in it.”
Ancient_Egyptian:Hello there, Mr.author. your novel needs a remake... but you need to be more experience... so I recommend for you to gain as much experience as you can before remaking it. The general idea of your novel is not unique so you need to be more professional to gain more fans... so good luck.
Even though I can understand what you want to say, I don't know what or who Tai Lung is. And the summary of my review is that I want him to accumulate experience as soon as possible to rewrite the beginning of the novel again.
aigaakabane14:Even if the novel's story is not unique, it can be changed in the future chapters, his writing will grow and if he has some time, he can rewrite his old chapters, just like what Master Oogway said, Oogway: “Look at this tree. I cannot make it blossom when it suits me, nor make it bear fruit before its time… No matter what you do, that seed will grow to be a peach tree. You may wish for an apple or an orange, but you will get a peach. Shifu: “But a peach cannot defeat Tai Lung!” Oogway: “Maybe it can… If you are willing to guide it, to nurture it. To believe in it.”