Review Detail of SolAce in Rise of King Arthur

From King Arthur to the KIng of Lust, this feels like a different take on the ancient, royal name. I found the flow pretty smooth for me, which is a good perk. Here are some of my issues though: 1. Grammar— I only showed corrections up to chapter 2, but I hope you see the missing commas, misspellings, and spacing issues I tried to correct. You seem to have trouble with run-on sentences, so I would recommend checking Grammarly or another grammar correcting app to see if it can assist you. 2. Flow— It was good, but it could improve more. My suggestion would be to combine 2 sentences into a compound sentence, as it gives for a smoother experience. Additionally, conjunctions are the way to go ! 3. Story development and Character— While the plot was novel, I found the character to not be to my liking. Maybe he will grow to be stronger later, but I would have enjoyed at least one redeeming quality about him. However, don’t get discouraged ! We all start from somewhere; only difference is the little things we do to improve, so I hope you enjoy your writing and take my advice with a grain of salt. After all, this is your story ! Keep up the good work, Author !