Honestly, the plot seems interesting and the humor is pretty decent so far. Synopsis is quite interesting as well but I had a few issues. I'm not sure if you're a native English speaker so I don't want to mark you too hard for it but the grammar needs some improvement. Just the capitalizations, spacings and punctuations. Otherwise great start to the story and I'd say keep at it. I'll keep my eye out for this book in hopes you fix the minor problems. Adding to collections too. Keep at it author.
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