if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly

the best story on this site............................................................................................................................................

The idea is actually really good however i thought that the execution could have been better, author had the chance to make this story really funny but i think due to english not being his first language it wasn't as good as it could have been. Personally I would have made the story a bit slower paced afterall 26 chapters in and we are almost at the Pain fight. I would also try to come up with a way to show the mc's progress when it comes to getting stronger. This story is perfect to focus around comedy since the protagonist is a cat so i wished the author could have put more effort in the comedy department But I still enjoyed the 26 chapters that out so far! Hokage Nekomata?!

Gonna start reading this. But honestly, I'm bored of naruto fanfics and their overused plots. so am hoping this is fresh otherwise.... I'll steal the writers kitty! (whatelse can I do? It's free content anyways ) ❤

Yo, Tobi here, Tobi only read till chapter 6 and decided to give a review. This story is about a guy who got isekai'ed to Naruto as a cat/kitten. Grammar not good but passable. That's it. We're done. Read it. Bye.

really good I recommend .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................not a bot i just have to do this bc you have to have atleast 40 words to make a review...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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The only thing I can say is Good job. By the way, he should at least learn the hiding like a mole technique cause that'd be really useful.

Writing Quality: It was readable, but there were many errors. Please use a spelling/grammar checker to avoid the worst of these. Stability of Updates: Was really good at the beginning, but started missing a few days at the end. Story Development: Wasn't really any challenges for Raijin. It was okay, but not as impactful as if he struggled. Character Design: Kind of flat. Other than Raijin and his solo mission, there were no new characters to judge this on. Most characters, even main ones like Naruto, seemed more like background characters than supporting characters. In fact Raijin is the only reasoln I did not give you a 0 for this category, earning 2 stars by himself. World Background: Cannon Naruto. Pretty much no expansion on it - in fact glosses over details of the Naruto world. Could use more context and a lot more development to make it your own. In all, its a decent concept, but needs a lot of fleshing out and a bit of editing to polish it into something really good.