Review Detail of amaturewriter in Hiatus:Ultimate Card System: One piece

the story is dope. power is especially dope. MC is strong and becoming OP fast. all dope. what sucks. the time MC is in [ very close to water 7 arc...basically he has 3 moths left before water 7 arc ] and the MC's intention of wanting to not change and wait for cannon events to occur and wanting to help SH. Seeing his mission, i;ll assume he'll temporarily become their nakama .... would've preferred way earlier or something different, rather than him helping or joining em. MC also seems to be more of a heroic of ' good ' character, that wants to save rather selfish, neutral, evil, etc. so theres that. hopefully MC isnt a fan boy who later joins SH. hopefully changes cannon or atleast does his own shit rather than joining em and slightly changing cannon, whilst mostly riding on their coattails cause that'd be shit. other than its all pretty much dope. the plot might seem boring but still too early to judge, hopefully it'll be different from the other ff's of a similar plot.