So the writing is overall great. What are my worries for the author though... Everyone knows a bit of what Avatar is about (even those who are not fan knows the main idea of the story). So you do have a big pair of shoes to fill. As for how the story is going, the pace is good. There are no unnecessary info. I don't really read fan-fic, but from the chapters I read, I can do a good bet that this is a very well-written fan-fic, it's on par to the OG stories here.
Brian_Hanes_117
Liked it!
LIKENot saying that people won't read it, but like you said, as what happens with all sequels, people will compare. That's what I meant with a big shoe to fill.
Brian_Hanes_117:Although this story respects and doesn't contradict canon there are a lot of factors in AMJ that we don't know about. Like the story introduces many new characters/groups and readers don't know their fates.
Although this story respects and doesn't contradict canon there are a lot of factors in AMJ that we don't know about. Like the story introduces many new characters/groups and readers don't know their fates.
Brian_Hanes_117:I don't see why that's a reason to take away from it. This is a spin-off after all and major stories have sequels. It expands the world-building of Avatar, so plenty of things can change. You'll just have to read and see.