Review Detail of Homeless1983 in Those zombies again
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So its been 90 chapters with 958 average words / ch. The last review was a week ago, and it was basically dead land since. There was two one star reviews. One of them were stating that female-lead is horrible idea for a novel... So obviously that person never read even one chapter or synopsis. And second one was about similar. I know there is not much people who actually patiently read at least 50 chapters. But if you managed to do that, hopefully you can leave a review with your thoughts, even if its a 3 star one or so. I`m stuck at about 140ish chapters, and i am not sure if that work actually worth your time. Maybe i should rewrite it from first person? Maybe i should make more thoughts and face expressions for characters? Or maybe fix some shit?Or maybe you want MC turn to an undead?
Those zombies again
Homeless1983
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Do not worry. Indeed Jane is special character and she is extremely beautiful. But MC will not get to her any time soon and I am not sure if that will happen in future, at least I am not that far yet. And thank you for reading and review.
Conquerer007:author are u planning romance between jane and mc please dont do that cause by the way mc thinks about her every now and then it seems worrying.
I am one of the one-star reviews and that was just my honest opinion! Yes, the female lead and everything else is just terrible done but the female lead isn't the only aspect. Many factors make this Novel horrible awful and I was and still am too lay to write hundreds of words to voice them out! As I said, the Idea is good but terribly executed by you!
His progress feels Real, no cheat skill, no Old grandpa in a ring, dragon Blood. Just twiates mind and bugs:) i dont know what you want to do with them but i have couple of ideas in my head xd. I know that lack of feedback and reviews looks bad for you, but some of us really enjoy this work. The type of MC you created, is the type that i love to read about. Its sad that not a lot of authors want to write about them. Undead seems cool, i like soul power in evil characters, slave contracts, puppets and many more. Bugs looks interesting, but that depends on what you will do with them. Hope it can help, cheer up!
Thank you for review and rely :) Maybe i will think of some of those things you mentioned. I will add at least 4 chapters tomorrow.
Daoist_Culture:His progress feels Real, no cheat skill, no Old grandpa in a ring, dragon Blood. Just twiates mind and bugs:) i dont know what you want to do with them but i have couple of ideas in my head xd. I know that lack of feedback and reviews looks bad for you, but some of us really enjoy this work. The type of MC you created, is the type that i love to read about. Its sad that not a lot of authors want to write about them. Undead seems cool, i like soul power in evil characters, slave contracts, puppets and many more. Bugs looks interesting, but that depends on what you will do with them. Hope it can help, cheer up!
No problem, its hard to find an evil MC story, so ill stick with you for sure. We need some lemons too, im not Talking about romance, Just pure Lust xd.
Homeless1983:Thank you for review and rely :) Maybe i will think of some of those things you mentioned. I will add at least 4 chapters tomorrow.
