This is a story about a selfish and antisocial mc who learns to care about others on his way to learn to be a proper leader This is a story about a reserved kid who learns to be outgoing and confident to be a dependable member This is a story about an arrogant and troublesome kid who learns to be humble as he becomes an unyeilding and mighty fighter There are plenty more characters to be introduced with their own flaws and aspirations to conquer. Read as they overcome their own demons (literally and figuratively) and conquer them for their own use. Be amazed at how they discover the origins of their powers in their conquest to go around the world. Prepare to have a heartwarming and heart crunching moments that will ineviatbly bring them closer together.
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LIKEWell not exactly since he does have a power, the system. **********SPOILER*********** His crew will have two powers each. Bang, the mc, has a power of the system. Like his crew members, he will also have another power beside the system.
As of now, there isn’t but as the story progresses they may meet potential love interests. There will be no romance between crew members but if I introduce a female crew member and there is very good chemistry between them then I may think about it.
Will Mc be weaker than his Crew members. Be honest
I still did not start reading out of the fear that Mc is a Trash that is weaker than his Crew members.
WARNING NOTHING AGAINST YOU AUTHOR!!! Why is the Captain not stronger. If he is not even stronger than his crew members then I really dont know how to read the Novel without giving to many hate comments, lets not say if this is a One Piece Fan Fic. Afterall, if in One Piece the Captain is not even little stronger then the Rest of his Crew than he is the titel ,,Captain,, not even worth. So 1 last Question will he be stronger than his Crew members if yes then I will try to read it. If no then, soory this is not for me. Tip: If the Mc is not even stronger than his other Crew members than the most Readers will drop this becouse they think Mc is nothing special among his Crew even tought he is the one to give them the Power. (Is always so, nothing against your Novel Idea if the Idea is that the Mc is not even stronger than his Crew Members/Friends)
He is the captain because he is the only one who can lead them to their victory regardless of his strength. ***SPOILER*** The mc does get stronger than his crew but that is way ahead in the future. In these early chapters, the crew will be stronger than the mc. That does not mean that the mc will be useless.
There are 77 chapter and you mean he his still weaker than his Crew members? If yes then it is to late to make Mc stronger. And Author I did go directly to the later chapters and saw Zero or few comments. So it means most people must have dropped it in the early chapters.
This novel will go on for hundreds of chapters, maybe thousands. If you think about like one piece, then there are a lot more chapters to come. This novel is about how the mc gets stronger and how he improves himself. What I like about novels is how a character becomes powerful and changes for the better. If the mc is strong from the start, then he would not have the motivation to change himself (bc he is selfish and a loner).
Well good luck my Friend but you must see that even if it has 1000 chapters will there be any Readers that will make it this far even if they did there would be to few. Why did you not just create your own Novel World with One Piece as a inspiration where the Power System would made more sense instead of a Fan Fic. Afterall Quality is over Quantity.
and the sad thing in here is you need to pay a lot of coins or fast pass before you can see the captain get strong, its just not worth it, only those who like this kind of genre will see its worth and wont regret using the coins or fast pass
O poder de sistema dele é ser escravo do sistema his system power is to be a slave to the system É a minha opinião pessoal mais espero q se o autor ler isso n afete ele,pois o q é ruim pra mim pode ser bom pra alguém😅😅 It is my personal opinion but I hope that if the author reads this it will not affect him, because what is bad for me can be good for someone