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2021-08-26 04:23

not bad but the writing quality is atrocious. it's worse then quiet a few MTLs I've read and all this could be easily fixed if the author used grammarly or something similar. I wanted to give the book ago but the mistakes are a bit to numerous for me as of right now. I'll pick this up if the earlier cheaters end up being edited or something but till then, this one isnt for me. good story from what I've read tho, just too many errors for me to read since correcting the spelling un my head kinda takes out the joy of reading.

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This is your author, Yanglin of Mountain Reliance King. As I am writing a shameless review for myself, of course, I would have to mark myself full score to compensate for my fragile heart of effort put into the book so far. With forty-three chapters so far, I believe that my slow but steady effort should have created a proper background for this book to continue without feeling too rushed and rigid to the point it missing the slice of life that supposed to be included. The novel Lan Xian Di, aka Supreme Emperor of Mist, touched on the story of Qin Lan as he followed his own belief to walk the path of cultivation once more as he unlocks the memories about his first, second, and third reincarnations. It won't be a rushed story for sure, as I'm intended to make this more of a slice of life novel. As I am still inexperienced right now, the story might seem lacking in picturing many aspects of the story. But I'll put effort as it goes to make this novel better in each chapter. Another part to take note of is due to my OCD health issue, this author of yours will always have difficulty completing a chapter properly. Often, it's because my idea and writing don't match one another in the expected 1500 words and above. It is also my biggest trouble so far as once in a while, producing a chapter end up as a hurdle to me for days and weeks. But I'll try my best to continue. Webnovel did offer me a contract early when we're at around fifteen chapters, but I hesitated as I'm worried that I couldn't perform as required. Of course, signing one would be great because it means my book will be valued greatly. I'll end this review here as today is counted as one of the best days for me so far. Do expect a chapter update soon. Wish me better, and stay safe, everyone. I hope you'll continue to support me as I try my best to complete this work. Thank you. Mountain Reliance King, Yanglin

Ancient_Egyptian
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It is a peaceful novel ... The MC is not ambitious, arrogant, bloodthirsty, or even cold ... He actually a peaceful and easygoing person ... Of course this don't mean he is weak, No he is strong but because he always fight with peoples who is higher than him in cultivation level he appears to be weak ... Anyway The MC lifestyle is considerably less aggressive and he care more about his subordinates and frinds more than his goals ... He don't feel offended over little thnigs and can ignore the ignorant people easily without losing his temper ... [Though his relationship with the ninth prince look like the backstory of novel with MC (or his father) who worked hared with his best friend (the crown prince) and faced everything together and in the end when the best friend ( the crown prince) become the King he becomes paranoid about his best friend (the MC or his father) so he decided to kill him mercilessly just to protect his throne.] For other characters inside the novel .... Will .... They aren't bad but Mr. author don't give them enough exposure they mostly feel secondary characters and even thier development is always behind the scene and we don't even get know how they get stronger or if their any secret they have or what is their opinions on the major decisions of the MC or how is thier daily life is,...etc. The plot of the novel is actually like any other chinese novel when the MC become to strong to his current place he will move to the next station. Lastly, the harem members of this novel ... Until know their only one confirmed (Hu Jia "his legal wife") and one potential wife on the way (Zhou Mei "His business partner") ,and lastly the lesser potential one(Lu Qing Yun "His frist female servant"), The harem here is slow paced because the MC is content with his wife so if those potential harem members don't actively pursue him then he will not even think inappropriately about them. And here I will recommend this novel for those who want less violence and more schemes ... also It's more likeable for anyone who want to pass his free time.

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