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Littlepunnie
LittlepunnieLv33yr
2020-12-25 09:37

Hola! I'm giving 5 stars for story development, character design and the world background. It's not the typical isekai that lands the main lead as the main character of the novel, comics, etc. In terms of writing, you write and your good at narrating, but I'm looking for something spicy but simple. ( Not a professional fella, I always read AshKnight's books haha ) I can feel that you have edited the chapters? It's a good point if you have done the editing. The words you used are easy to apprehend. I'm looking up to Hua's adventure, but I hope there will be some love spice as the novel progresses and as read thru it. You are a good writer. I'm now eyeing you Author! HAPPY WRITING! [◍•ᴗ•◍]

Blue Moon Princess

The_Chimp
4.6
213 Chs

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The_Chimp
The_ChimpAuthor

Thank you for your review... Yes, I've done a little review by myself. And about romance... well, here's the thing. I don't know whether Hua will experience it some day, but as of right now, I don't plan to bring it up because I personally haven't experienced it. And it's always fun if you write something you experienced. Once again, thank you.

3yr
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Littlepunnie
LittlepunnieLv3

You are welcome. Well, Author, I can only wait for your chapter updates. I will wait for that love spice.

The_Chimp:Thank you for your review... Yes, I've done a little review by myself. And about romance... well, here's the thing. I don't know whether Hua will experience it some day, but as of right now, I don't plan to bring it up because I personally haven't experienced it. And it's always fun if you write something you experienced. Once again, thank you.
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No_No_1337
No_No_1337Lv1

Yeah, there's no problem with readability with this one! Even me with some reading complications can read every sentence without getting annoyed at the meanings. More books like this WN!

3yr
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DgodRequiem
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Hello there~ It's an excellent book that just seems to click with me and I grinded until the latest chapter. The writing is good and flows really well; it gives you a vivid enough image that you don't feel lost or confused. The story has been developing nicely, and it doesn't stick too much on the cliches we see in most novels. The character design is also very interesting with the characters coming off sort of 'alive' to me it makes me feel something basically they give off emotions that I can relate to and that made me appreciate your writing more. Though a lot of the world has been introduced, I feel that we still don't know what realms there are for cultivation, all we know is Qi level and the last stage before Godhood is Ancient. Sorry, I am rambling but when I read an excellent book I get so immersed that I feel like 'What if I was in the novel'. If you want a good cultivation read where you can find out more about cultivation, I recommend I Shall Seal the Heavens.

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The_Chimp
The_ChimpAuthor

Hey, hey, hey! Tenth review, baybay! I'll get my stars now, hehe... Anyway, the one reading this, thank you for visiting this novel and I hope you have fun reading this novel of mine. Thank you.

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Bruvplex
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Love how the lead is not some weakling or just going head first into everything but planning her moves ahead of time while keeping in mind about what she has at her disposal 💯💯

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nishidurani
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This book is worth the title of winning the wpc #147. Fresh writing, and good wordings. And the way she adapted to her new world was interesting.

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Ntharani
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this book is different from all the cultivation books I have read where the MC is hero working hard and gaining success easily. brought a fresh change. looking forward to more updates.

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the book is a gem, I like the funny interactions of the MC, the way she reacts is cute. and hope the changes she is bringing would be in her favour. good work author

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No_No_1337
No_No_1337Lv1

The main character spends a lot of time thinking about getting her ass kicked. And then she doesn't get it. SAD! No for real though this is good, just read it. I'm only giving it 4,8 because I personally don't like the amount of thinking she does. Otherwise, we have a sassy mc who isn't afraid to stir trouble or tell what's on her mind.

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