I like this novel but so far there is a severe lack of world-building, and we're given no concept of the different levels of strength or the requirements to reach them, as such it feels rushed. the MC also lacks a compelling reason for seeking strength, he became the richest man in town, got the girl, gained the approval of his father-in-law, and even had political support so why would he feel the need to run off on an adventure to get even stronger? I do really like the concept and it has potential but alot more thought needs to go into story development
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