The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, just mention he/she is there and that's it. the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, one time he has some weird stats named flame intensity at level 2 the next one it is lvl9 or something... he gains powers without explaination or reason like he got "godly" seeds or something OUT OF NOWHERE and nothing to explain how the feck does the flame even have those things on it's person without burning it to the ground... plus the fact that they are special and can be planted into barren earth and somehow still bear food... I mean even fanfictions are written better than this novel honestly... This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
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