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Teriyakee
TeriyakeeLv14yr
2021-01-08 20:39

The story is okay, but the Mc is way too stupid for his own good, I like how he helps his subjects, but every time he helps them he always leaves it unfinished leading to more problems to arise for them. His choices of taking in subjects that were his enemy is also stupid, but due to the story they converted to his followers because he is strong. The Mc could be way better than what he is right now, we also barely know anything about the world, also the characters are barely fleshed out, all we know is oh she got curves and she’s beautiful, that’s it. Overall my rating is Translation quality: 5 stars Stability of updates: 5 stars Story development: 3 stars Character design: 2 stars World background: 2 stars 3.4 stars

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The_Reaper6
The_Reaper6Lv2

So technically it's kinda bad

Dark_Scholars
Dark_ScholarsLv13

It is terrible. He woke as a flame as was like let's burn everything then oh no shelter it is going to rain.

The_Reaper6:So technically it's kinda bad
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