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Monalishingun
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2021-02-15 20:06

Writing 3/5 - Decent grammar. MC's lines could be better. Chapter length is long enough. Stability of Updates 3/5 - A few updates a month is good enough for me, chapter length is what kept it from being just 2. Story Development 3/5 - A pretty balanced score as I don't know where this is going. Character Design 3/5 - MC is pretty bland and somewhat uncharismatic. His "bullying the strong" doesn't really make any sense in his case and makes him a hypocrite (in my opinion). His condescending attitude is fine, but it's not really entertaining type compared to other (more well-written condescending) MCs. World Background 4/5 - I don't even need to explain this. But, y'know: RI-reverse is the World Background and Gu Zhen Ren (RI author) did a good job writing it. However, it became a 4/5 due to things that weren't explained in enough details. The Total Score 3.8/5 - I don't rate everything 5/5 anymore.

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Nike13K
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The bullying the strong thing didn't really mean much. It isn't his conviction or life goal, it is just something he said randomly.

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