Review Detail of Quade_Ong in Was it Suicide?

After reading this chapter I gotta say, wow what a rush. That first chapter really set things up well and hit hard, going from happy to cheerful to creepy in just a couple of sentences. I really was not expecting that tone shift. My only criticism is that the last part felt a bit abrupt as I was not entirely sure what exactly was happening in the change. I feel like a bit more time could have been spent exploring the change in scenery. Aside from that though, the story is excellent so far and I am really looking forward to seeing how the story develops.