The grammar is good with almost no mistakes. The sentence flow is not the best. This makes the story a chore to read at points. I found myself skipping over some of the cultivation explanations. Nothing innovative that makes these cultivation sections worth reading. The story is well thought out. The book is generic at the beginning, but becomes an interesting read later on. I recommend the book for xianxia readers looking for a new novel. This also a decent book for those who want to get into xianxia and don’t want to start reading a 1000 chapter book. This story has nothing unique or mold-breaking that would make non-xianxia readers interested. With all that said, I personally look forward to new chapters.
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