Review Detail of Just_Everything in Embers Ad Infinitum

well I've only made it to chapter 6 but non the less I've read the equivalent of 50. great story, very well written. overall it drags out way to much by chapter 6 I've been pumped with so much information that I've forgotten the previous chapter little redundant. I'm not saying it's bad but could use a lot of clean up. regardless the story does keep you interested for some time even tho there isn't a story being told rather overly enhanced descriptions of chats doors food the inner working it's great but can only go so far feels like I'm being told a story by a grandparent reminiscing. so overall if you don't mind overly explained very well written little grammer mistakes ;) seemlessy little story progression ( that's what I'm assuming by the six chapters that the whole story is going to be done this way then this is for you) however even if you want a normal paced story then this is still for you. it's a diamond in the rough. need more reviews of this story an less fanboying. Dammed if that door doesn't have marking at 2 meters high tho. much love apologies for grammar