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Just_Everything

Just_Everything

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2020-05-27 JoinedAustralia
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    SCAN what's withs all's the s's's it's really's annoying's

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    The Most Satisfied Reincarnate
    Fantasy · DragonKnov
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    Just_Everything3yr
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    well I've only made it to chapter 6 but non the less I've read the equivalent of 50. great story, very well written. overall it drags out way to much by chapter 6 I've been pumped with so much information that I've forgotten the previous chapter little redundant. I'm not saying it's bad but could use a lot of clean up. regardless the story does keep you interested for some time even tho there isn't a story being told rather overly enhanced descriptions of chats doors food the inner working it's great but can only go so far feels like I'm being told a story by a grandparent reminiscing. so overall if you don't mind overly explained very well written little grammer mistakes ;) seemlessy little story progression ( that's what I'm assuming by the six chapters that the whole story is going to be done this way then this is for you) however even if you want a normal paced story then this is still for you. it's a diamond in the rough. need more reviews of this story an less fanboying. Dammed if that door doesn't have marking at 2 meters high tho. much love apologies for grammar

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    Embers Ad Infinitum
    Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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    Just_Everything3yr
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    if elements are only for show then there isn't a point to categorise these things given you could do the same with fire etc magic in and of itself would essentially cancel eachother or am I just not understanding something?

    Natural water magic could be described as the jack of all trades because it had excellent attack and defense capabilities. Water could coat the caster and form a protective barrier, it could solidify into ice become weapons and it could form tendrils of water perfect for locking down an enemy. Master taught Azemo to be wary of even the weakest natural water user.
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    The Birth of a Demon Lord
    Fantasy · Silloh
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    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    wouldn't it be better to leave the arrow in unless it went straight through his body? pulling it would cause more damage?

    [Suggestion. Pull the arrow and close the wound by scorching using metal objects.]
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    Becoming Legend
    Fantasy · Neorealist
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    mere grade e why the slight arrogance now that he acquired his memories and a few buff skills?

    "You're quite tough for a mere grade E monster!" Ned cried, unsheathing his rusty knife. He closed in again. This time he moved swiftly to the back of the lizard. "But let's see how tough your joints are!"
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    Becoming Legend
    Fantasy · Neorealist
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Replied to Mlongue

    it's pretty smart not to use snipers or guns tho you have to be mathematically inclined for sniping and in a city it would be stupid to use one but again both have drawbacks and considerable amount of risk

    Back in my old world, I never enjoyed using guns or sniping my targets, my weapons of choice were a short-sword and dagger, I enjoyed sneaking up on my targets and taking them out with a single slash or stab.
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    Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World
    Fantasy · Aimdaqs
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    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    I'm not to sure but with all the Maxwell this an that I think they might be the bad people

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    While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    then why rent it then. it's okay to be poor man

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    While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    isn't that how it always is

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    Eye System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Replied to Bertony

    why reply

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    Rise of the Demon God
    Eastern · Demonic_angel
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    better to do it before as it gives more protection

    Leaving my bed, I went to the bathroom to empty my bladder. I used to brush my teeth after waking up, but after gaining some of my memories I came to the conclusion that it was a waste of time. I was going to dirty them anyway with breakfast, so might as well do it after eating.
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    The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
    Anime & Comics · Zakirael
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    Just_Everything3yr
    Replied to glo_antttt

    it'd work both ways the first comment would be the more reliable way an future proof it. your way would more then likely crumble on its self after a short while

    Of course, should he really become so strong as to possess the power to overthrow this world in the future, Meng Lei didn't mind changing the world and cleansing the times, and return a beautiful world to Heaven's Vault Continent!
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    Picking Up Attributes From Today
    Eastern · Panda Reunion
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    the captain spent 16 years to become stage two? how will they be stage 4? am I missing something

    After that, they would be able to support themselves and successfully finish their studies. By the time they successfully graduated, no matter how poorly they did, they would also have become Fourth-Grade Warriors.
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    Picking Up Attributes From Today
    Eastern · Panda Reunion
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Replied to Duckfero

    still doesn't make much sense he turns into the same type of guy during him sticking up to the guy. either way he turn against everything he claimed to be over an insult he claims to be near immune to, personally just don't like the connection breaking of the building of the mc

    "Don't worry I'll keep my promise, but this does seem unfair... Hmmm, I guess I can allow you to get your friends to help you it doesn't matter how much you bring. It's just fair since my rank is higher than you after all."
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    One More Time: Rebirth
    Fantasy · lynerparel
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  • Just_Everything
    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    so much for protecting ya family didn't even ask about her

    The creature doesn't respond back to me. Tch, whatever. What else do I have to lose? I am already dead. After that apocalyptic event, there is no way I lived through that. What the hell happened to my planet!? And what was the blackish portal from above when the trucks were falling down one me? I had so many unanswered questions. But the only thing that matter to me now was seeing if the golden glowing scroll in front of me could really grant me power. Life is all about taking risks. Well even though I am dead... You get the point.
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    Marvel: Anime System
    Anime & Comics · HaremGodZ
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    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    is this an actual world like first person view? or the front view from the game? need clarification for my mental images or spectator mode

    Since I am in the middle of nowhere with nothing but a set of tools I decided the first thing I needed is shelter. And it was quite the enlightening experience trying to build one, especially the part where I gathered materials.
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    From Earth to Terraria: A Tough Journey
    Video Games · Cold_Housefire
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    Just_Everything3yr
    Commented

    forgot to add 'one' in the chosen one part (:

    "I presume that you are confused about what is happening," (He has absolutely no idea how confused I am) "...and I can assure you that there is no underlying point in you being here than by sheer bad luck." (Damn this world) "The world of Terraria is in danger of destruction, meaning that it needed someone to save the world from whatever calamity that is to come. That is why you are here, you have been chosen as the to save this world from its doom. I hope you are prepared for this grand journey." (And at this point I am perfectly replicating the pose of someone who had just been told that they have a terminal disease that could only be cured if they die, which is pretty much saying its just a fact that you are screwed)
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    From Earth to Terraria: A Tough Journey
    Video Games · Cold_Housefire
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