Review Detail of UltimateDarkness in Tales of Demons and Gods: Anime Skill

Ouch, even though I'm writing this fanfic just for fun. Seeing many people who give ratings and scores below 4, I'm still sad, bro. If what you criticize about my writing, please only give it a low score, don't give it all low. For those who have provided comments containing criticism and suggestions that are in accordance with the actual assessment. Thank you...