Review Detail of SirZed in Tales of Demons and Gods: Anime Skill

Overall it's bad. Firstly the grammar is terrible. Just reading a couple of sentences made nauseas with my brain constantly auto-correcting he/she and him/her. Now I would have left it at that and still continued reading a bit but after I believe it was chapter 6 or 7 when he kissed Nie Lie's ass. First of all if you look at it from another perspective, how the hell can a kid, who never left Glory City mind, know any of these places? Another thing that bothered me was that he followed the plot basically as well as. If you are looking for a good TDG FanFiction, this ain't it.