Ok, so good start but is the MC a woman or a man cause you keep mixing up he and she pick one please it makes it hard to read. Ok, so good start but is the MC a woman or a man cause you keep mixing up he and she pick one please it makes it hard to read.Ok, so good start but is the MC a woman or a man cause you keep mixing up he and she pick one please it makes it hard to read.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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LIKEUltimateDarkness:okay that's my fault, I will correct the use of he and she for the previous CHAPTER