Not worth it. MC is a side character and becomes nie li's underling. MC will give up any women nie li likes. MC also has many weaknesess just like Nie li, which is his family and his so-called 'brother'. If you have experiences in reading even basic scheming cultivation world novels, you will damage your brain reading this because of the author's logic.

This is horrible. I had a headache just reading half of the first chapter. And when I got past that it was like mc was nei li's puppy. Beta mc. 🤮🤮🤮

Ok, so good start but is the MC a woman or a man cause you keep mixing up he and she pick one please it makes it hard to read. Ok, so good start but is the MC a woman or a man cause you keep mixing up he and she pick one please it makes it hard to read.Ok, so good start but is the MC a woman or a man cause you keep mixing up he and she pick one please it makes it hard to read.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? how many girls? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? how many girls?

Overall it's bad. Firstly the grammar is terrible. Just reading a couple of sentences made nauseas with my brain constantly auto-correcting he/she and him/her. Now I would have left it at that and still continued reading a bit but after I believe it was chapter 6 or 7 when he kissed Nie Lie's ass. First of all if you look at it from another perspective, how the hell can a kid, who never left Glory City mind, know any of these places? Another thing that bothered me was that he followed the plot basically as well as. If you are looking for a good TDG FanFiction, this ain't it.

if u were looking for good fanfic this is not for u. the mc was a lackey of nie lie. better read the original or look for pther tdg fanfic. this fanfic was totally copy paste with insert mc of author in short totally trash/garbage

I'm writing this fanfic just for fun. Since I'm not a native English speaker, you'll find lots of grammar mistakes on this fanfic. Hope you enjoy reading this fanfic. So please, don't criticize my grammar too much, you guys are allowed to give me suggestions and I write this only in my spare time. Thank you...

Mc is just a lap dog of nie li Doing this brother nie li this brother nie li at one point i thought mc is going for nie li as his lover 🤮🤮and he Is A beta and for a guy who can create anime skills why cant he think of a chant i mean in TDG its all about the words and intent he can just create a technique for cultivation ....

Where to begin 1. This is one of those TDG novels where MC kisses Nie lie ass. 2. Author constantly mixes gender with He and she so it’s annoying. 3. Mc gives up girl for Nie lie. Which in my mind was the last stroke for me. 4. MC is just flat out lame

Ouch, even though I'm writing this fanfic just for fun. Seeing many people who give ratings and scores below 4, I'm still sad, bro. If what you criticize about my writing, please only give it a low score, don't give it all low. For those who have provided comments containing criticism and suggestions that are in accordance with the actual assessment. Thank you...