Review Detail of Nomed_Forcraziness in Kabuki Kai

Item: Kabuki Kai
Rating: 5

Review detail

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........................................................................ It was good, but needs improvement . The author can do better. The story line is interesting, But needs more info about various things, as the readers may get confused, on what they're reading. Some may know but mostly won't. Anyways Good work! Keep it up!

Kabuki Kai

Wataku

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Yeah make auxiliary pages I think they will help understand basic things also I would say try adding things like a character proclaimed this or said this or asked or a character shouted after they talk so we know how they feel other than that this has a lot of potential keep up

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