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RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthor3yrRachelRuth

Why the fu-ck are you writing Harem Cultivation? What a rip-off. This stuff doesn't even make any sense! Harem is inherently bad and I came here to tell you that! CEOs tags are for females, why would a male read about the perspective of a CEO? It's just a wish-fulfillment tag for females. Ugh. The CEO acts like a pussy. What a pathetic loser. He's at that freaking age and can't even get a girlfriend? SIMP. Oh where the heck is the cultivation aspect? What do you mean there's no dual cultivation yet? I HATE Slice-of-Life. It's been 14 chapters and he only went this far with the female?! The pace is too freaking slow. Can't you write better action? Where is the PLOT. Seriously, go back to the Female Lead section and stay there. The writing is awful. Quit writing. Give me 50 updates per day. Don't write at all. What a bad update schedule. Stop writing. Seriously don't even try. Also by any chance did you come here to root for the CEO as he sweep the girls off their feet? HAH in your wildest dreams. What a pathetic attempt to bring the ML and FL readers together, Author-san! Why isn't the Male Lead being a charismatic suave that gets all the ladies with ease? He can't even get the cold aloof CEO type right. And why isn't he arriving in his CEO Company with a private jet or at least a limousine? I don't like his face and attitude. Why can't you write about a girl collecting all the CEOs in the country? ( Author: I actually have that planned out in desperation if this doesn't work out so kill me haha ) Why did you lock the chapters at a freaking cliffhanger?! Did you think that I'd actually pay for this sh-t?! Hah! Reading here is too expensive. Boo. What nonsense are you even writing?! You can't even get reviews so you're forced to make one right now. What a pitiful fool. This thing is 1800+ characters already?! Nobody will even read this review all to the end, oh wait. I can make a better review telling you how BAD your work is and this isn't even talking about half of it! I'm spiteful enough to do this.

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My CEO Harem Cultivation System

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RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

No, it predated the current reviews xD

FunnyBuns:When I first clicked on this I thought this was to address actual reviews on this series.
RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

I freaking dare the Author to delete this review. This is my opinion about the book and I think it's only fair that this one isn't deleted if they keep all the 5 star emojis reviews. Seriously, we all need to be more realistic with reviews.

Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

It's funny that only your own reviews are actually negative xD, almost skipped seeing rating so close to 4, but checked cause of low amount of reviews

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Oh hey, Inferno_Vor 🤣 so the thing is, for my book to receive an actual rating, I need a total of 10 reviews. Wouldn't be fair to give 5 star reviews so I thought ahead and trash-talked the novel already lol. Although the gripe is somewhat accurate depending on what you're looking for

Inferno_Vor:It's funny that only your own reviews are actually negative xD, almost skipped seeing rating so close to 4, but checked cause of low amount of reviews
Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

True, but I don't understand people who don't like such novels, but still get into them and leave a bad review, so usually such reviews seem pointless to me. Anyhow keep up the good work 😁

RachelRuth:Oh hey, Inferno_Vor 🤣 so the thing is, for my book to receive an actual rating, I need a total of 10 reviews. Wouldn't be fair to give 5 star reviews so I thought ahead and trash-talked the novel already lol. Although the gripe is somewhat accurate depending on what you're looking for
RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Well, the more you strongly feel against something, the more you might find yourself actually liking it? The more you hate, the more you love? I dunno myself xD Thanks dude! Hopefully I actually manage to make it into a good read

Inferno_Vor:True, but I don't understand people who don't like such novels, but still get into them and leave a bad review, so usually such reviews seem pointless to me. Anyhow keep up the good work 😁
Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

I generally like it honestly, an interesting setting and a unique personality. I just hope he won't be that stiff all the time.

RachelRuth:Well, the more you strongly feel against something, the more you might find yourself actually liking it? The more you hate, the more you love? I dunno myself xD Thanks dude! Hopefully I actually manage to make it into a good read
RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Yeah, I hope he loosens up and becomes more tolerable or else it'd be pretty awkward when I write the R-18 stuff 🤣 by any chance, would you read a scene if it was in the FL's perspective or does it work better if it's in the guy's pov?

Inferno_Vor:I generally like it honestly, an interesting setting and a unique personality. I just hope he won't be that stiff all the time.
Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

Meh, personally like reading it from ML perspective, but those scenes go down on personal preferance. You could mix it up if you really want or if you do multiple scenes with a single girl swap it every scene.

RachelRuth:Yeah, I hope he loosens up and becomes more tolerable or else it'd be pretty awkward when I write the R-18 stuff 🤣 by any chance, would you read a scene if it was in the FL's perspective or does it work better if it's in the guy's pov?
RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

ML perspective is still preferred and thanks for the suggestion! Nice thinking, I'll take that into account!

Inferno_Vor:Meh, personally like reading it from ML perspective, but those scenes go down on personal preferance. You could mix it up if you really want or if you do multiple scenes with a single girl swap it every scene.
LineCrosser
LineCrosserLv10LineCrosser

I was dead confused.

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

thanks for reading elegantdivinity 🤣

LineCrosser: I was dead confused.
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Mc_Fly
Mc_FlyLv13Mc_Fly

damm

TheAdventurer
TheAdventurerLv11TheAdventurer

confusion of da highest oda

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Wtf...seems like the author is one horrible writer...what a trash author

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Yes, you got it right, Venom_God! Let this review be a warning to everyone, avoid this while you still can. It's probably better that you don't see it at all xD

Venom_God:Wtf...seems like the author is one horrible writer...what a trash author
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The_Young_Flash
The_Young_FlashLv4The_Young_Flash

I am confused, is the author roasting him/herself?

RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

Yes I am, with a hint of self-loathing, but yes. This is self-roasting

The_Young_Flash:I am confused, is the author roasting him/herself?
The_Young_Flash
The_Young_FlashLv4The_Young_Flash

Haha, I don't know that technique... but I collected your novel anyway. You actually made me not want to read the novel now. Blahaha.

RachelRuth:Yes I am, with a hint of self-loathing, but yes. This is self-roasting
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RachelRuth
RachelRuthAuthorRachelRuth

OH, I am doing a good job lol with deterring people. It's not really your usual harem story is all if you're expecting instant smut and whatnot 🤔 so I put this one up. Others like the urban cultivation aspects though :3 quite a slow burn added with my own slow writing

The_Young_Flash:Haha, I don't know that technique... but I collected your novel anyway. You actually made me not want to read the novel now. Blahaha.
The_Young_Flash
The_Young_FlashLv4The_Young_Flash

Yeah, but I am pretty sure you drove away many prospective readers with your own review. Idk, I would take negative comments over forewarning.

RachelRuth:OH, I am doing a good job lol with deterring people. It's not really your usual harem story is all if you're expecting instant smut and whatnot 🤔 so I put this one up. Others like the urban cultivation aspects though :3 quite a slow burn added with my own slow writing