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Oto
OtoLv144yr
2021-01-04 03:43

This novel is like a nightmare. It’s a portrayal of everything wrong with China amplified on a galactic scale (literally). The society in the novel is vain, unintelligible, full of corruption, lawless, dystopian, etc. It’s really ironic whenever I read these types of novels becuase the author is clearly writing this to be a horrible society, but doesn’t realize that they are replicating China (or maybe they do). I am disappointed more and more with the new novels on this site. Is it so hard for Chinese authors to write something original or not downright stupid? Chapters 1-40 were not too bad of a read except for a few small things. Immediately gets weird from 41-50 and you can tell the story quality has dropped. This continues for roughly 100 chapters. After chapter 150 the novel devolves into a load of grabage. Its essentially just the same face-slapping garbage cultivation novel but with even more stupid idiots. Everyone ‘investigates in detail’ the MC but somehow always miss the blaringly obvious. Here’s the key issue: the MC is somehow the ‘King of Assassins’ but exposes himself and does extremely stupid shit constantly that could’ve easily been avoided without any difficulty. Sometimes he cleans up the loose ends 20-40 chapters later, but the only reason he gets away with it is plot armor. He says he doesn’t want to alert the enemy, and then he goes and creates mayhem and alerts the enemy. Don’t even get me started on the author’s obsession with China in this one. I am reminded by the author at least once every 10 chapters how China conquered the universe. Apparently 80% of all humans in the universe are Chinese becuase China is “the best at colonizing and adapting.” I don’t think China remembers that they were the one who always got invaded and conquered... According to the novel more than 3000 years have passed since the colonization period and the government is now “The Alliance,” yet somehow people are proud of their ‘Chinese blood’? Everyone always refers to their Chinese blood when they get offended and for some reason that makes them unable to withstand offense. (Starting to think that Chinese people might have a complex). Let’s list some of the other things: - Traditional Chinese arhitecture is somehow more expensive than gigantic skyscrapers - New Year’s is on Jan 1 but for some reason it lasts 10 days and everyone gives red packets? (Don’t really understand why the author felt the need to use the Western New Year’s Day instead of Chinese New Year... maybe its their complex again). Honestly, I’ve vented enough by now and am too tired to elaborate more. I’m still going to continue reading the novel as there’s nothing else, so maybe I’ll feel more aggrivated and add on to the review.

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Dwarkin
DwarkinLv13

don't you know that you are reading a Chinese novel written for Chinese readers? It's like anime/manga where something happens only in Japan and superhero comics/movies with USA. If I would ever write a novel there is a chance that Mongolia would be a center of universe, where space nomads are conquering galaxies.

Oto
OtoLv14

By that logic all novels written by a British person must be about the UK? Imagine if Harry Potter was like that lmao. You’re clearly just a Chinese shill who can’t argue with any of my points and instead chose to gaslight me. How pathetic you are..

Dwarkin:don't you know that you are reading a Chinese novel written for Chinese readers? It's like anime/manga where something happens only in Japan and superhero comics/movies with USA. If I would ever write a novel there is a chance that Mongolia would be a center of universe, where space nomads are conquering galaxies.
Dwarkin
DwarkinLv13

I haven't met such a stupid person for a long, long time 😂 You clearly can't even read (or understand) my comment and you are still trying to talk back, lmao😂😂😂

Oto:By that logic all novels written by a British person must be about the UK? Imagine if Harry Potter was like that lmao. You’re clearly just a Chinese shill who can’t argue with any of my points and instead chose to gaslight me. How pathetic you are..
Madara_Uchiha_4392
Madara_Uchiha_4392Lv2

erm.. theres only 40 chapters, what are you on about with the whole timestam** for when novels devolve in chapters and whatnot?

1996611q
1996611qLv12

Maybe he read the raw?

Madara_Uchiha_4392:erm.. theres only 40 chapters, what are you on about with the whole timestam** for when novels devolve in chapters and whatnot?
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Usagi_mofu
Usagi_mofuLv11

I dropped it at Chapter 27 so here's a summary of this novel in 27 chapters. So basically the mc returned from the future (100 years) where humanity almost or went extinct. He is raised in an organisation that deals in assassination. Oh, did I forgot that something called Heavenly-winged cicada (whatever) went with him back in time? No? Now you know. It raise his perception - also, he is rediculous handsome. Oh, you don't care? neither do I but it's mentioned a lot of times in this novel. So I thought might aswell tell you. Uhmm... There are items called miracle items that basically is fantasy level items with amazing effects and consequences like the (small spoiler and also the fact I dropped this novel) heavenly (something) dragon eye. It give him the ability of sight and other things that I don't remember. So the consequences are the bloodline heritage and that basically makes him constantly having the urge to mate and spread his genes. But here's the catch. he travels with his good friend (female) who obediently follows his orders and trust him completely. So yes, he didn't r*pe her anything like that, just that he chose other women to have s*x with so I don't know, didn't like that. It's pretty obvious that his friend will become the FL so when he chose someone else to have s*x with, it didn't really sit well with me because sometimes (mostly/frequently) that means it will become a harem. And I hate harems to the core. And yeah, the novel is cool unless you're like me who hate what I just mentioned. Translation - 5* (you can read smoothly) SoU - 5* (trial read, always 5 stars) Story Development - 1* (I just hate his choice, it's original 4 star) Character Design - 3* (Just because the mc has an unique side effect it makes a little bit better but like anything else he is extremely handsome (cliche) and his friend is extremely cold like all the other extreme beauties) World background - 4* (I don't know with 40 chapters but I guess it's quite explained, I'll just give it a 4 star)

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