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Hey guys, This is my first creative story that I’ve written. I mostly write research papers and business reports so I’m just trying to bring back my love for writing with this story! I’d really appreciate if you took some time to leave a small amount of feedback! I don’t really have a heavily thoughout story line, so if you have any ideas or events that you want to see unfold, let me know! This story is inspired by many webnovels that I’ve enjoyed reading and I wanted to give it a little twist. This story is dark, absurd, and tries to focus on what would really happen if a normal person was placed into the body of a predatorial animal. Anyways, thank you so much for reading and I hope that you let me know your thoughts on the begining of the story!