Writing Quality: 5. I enjoyed it for the most part Update Stability: 1. Hasn’t been uploaded in 2 months. Story Development: 3. It was alright until she became a male, all novels are great if they stick to the script, if you make a nonhuman mc, don’t think about human forms. If you make a female mc, don’t turn her into a male. Novels that do that go to a special place in the deep bowels of the fiery underworld. Character Design: 2. She wanted a male form, that little dumb idea dropped it to 3 stars but the fact that she’s somewhat op and acts so different than what a normal person would in this situation(both reincarnation and average Konoha civilian) just drops it down a star since she isn’t at all a good mc, kinda like a Mary Sue but she is also somehow an idiot which now that I think about it is pretty typical for characters of that type. World Background: 5. What can I say, it’s just Naruto. I was gonna give it a 1 since the author didn’t do much else to make the world an interesting thing, if you’ve seen the show then all you gotta add is 1 person to it and strap a few plot points, give her a power of your choice, and then sit back as she does the work for you. So either 5 or 1. Overall: 3.2
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