Review Detail of USI in Behemoth (DROPPED)

Literally a shameless 5 star review from the author. This is my first time writing a web novel, but I've got a wide vision for what is to come in the series. I've taken a lot of inspiration from steampunk literature like the Leviathan Trilogy by Scott Westerfeld and light novel series such as the Saga of Tanya the Evil. This is of course, based in the events of WW1 and will have a lot of parallel events. However, there's going to probably be a lot of deviation from the actual events and the limited POVs will be interesting to develop. All in all, thanks for coming here and feel free to suggest anything that might make the web novel better. I hope you guys will enjoy the story!