Review Detail of AuHNG in Pentakill: Rebirth of the Legend
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Good novel, compelling. Suggestion: Make sure to flesh out who teleported him back in time later on. You could introduce a bit of fantasy or magic realism/sci fi into the novel. It would help your novel be way more compelling than all the stories in where this happens for no reason. Please try to think of an overarching plot that includes this. Overall 5/5 for now. enough said, added to library.
Pentakill: Rebirth of the Legend
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good. Also make sure to have lots of explosions. explosions are cool. (this is not a real suggestion, but it could be)
Tangerqueen:Thank you so much for the review! I generally try to outline ahead of time, so I will be hinting (or at least tossing little snippets here and there) as to why he is "back" later on!
TangerqueenAuthorTangerqueen
AuHNG:good. Also make sure to have lots of explosions. explosions are cool. (this is not a real suggestion, but it could be)
AuHNGLv4AuHNG
Oh also, side note: If you want to, or got the time, feel free to check my novel out. I really need feedback, and I think you'd be able to give me some advice as well.
Tangerqueen:LOL notedimage
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AuHNG:Oh also, side note: If you want to, or got the time, feel free to check my novel out. I really need feedback, and I think you'd be able to give me some advice as well.