Review Detail of MadFool in Highschool DxD: A new opportunity
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Well first of all the wtiting quality is quite good and there are rarely any grammar mistakes and updating stability is okay aswell. But that is really where the good news stop. The MC used to be an adult yet as many other fics do, the reincarnated Mc acts more like a child than a fully grown up man, which is the reason I detest reborn Mc’s that start as babies/kids. Now this is just my personal opinion so to those who like these kind of scenarios, I’m sure this will be a huge plus for you. Then we come to my biggest problem with the fanfic; this does not feel like a DxD verse, this is more Xianxia fantasy than anything else. I can get that each fanfic will have a personal touch from the author but when you go so far as to almost completely changing the genre, then maybe you should take a moment to rethink your choice of work.
Highschool DxD: A new opportunity
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I'd disagree with your review. None of your points ever specify any form of "criticism" besides being an attempt at making a sophisticated "I don't like it". I can say that you most likely didn't read the story so far, and even your simpleton tries at marking "negative points" are merely a ridiculous and subjective aspects that you just happened to dislike, not to mention, being factually incorrect. Do you actually read xianxia? 'Cause this fic has nearly nothing to do with one, it's outrageous that THIS could be the best example you could bring to this review. Before attempting at reviewing a novel, you should actually learn how to properly write and critize. In simple terms, saying that you "don't like it" isn't criticism nor is it any deserving of being called a "review"