Review Detail of torrelsav1 in Evolving Ghost System: Phantom Universe Expansion Pack

Item: Evolving Ghost System: Phantom Universe Expansion Pack
Rating: 3

Review detail

torrelsav1Lv153yrtorrelsav1

would've been good if the mc didn't have to be a goofball ideas great but feel more like a comedy show I guess,..............................

Evolving Ghost System: Phantom Universe Expansion Pack

RazorIsSharp

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RazorIsSharpAuthorRazorIsSharp

I actually was just thinking I kind of want to rewrite it with a more serious main character + character development. Will ask editor. Thanks for the review bro.

3yr

torrelsav1Lv15torrelsav1

I hope you do cuz the idea behind it is brilliant

3yr

Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

Ye I generally like comedies, but more as shorter term stories, while this seems something like a cultivation novel(it can go a while)

3yr

Alexandra_AnLv2Alexandra_An

Man... how can you??? only 3* even if there are things I would change it is still a very good story

3yr

THEIMMORTALDhantosLv4THEIMMORTALDhantos

brother sends this editor to work

RazorIsSharp:I actually was just thinking I kind of want to rewrite it with a more serious main character + character development. Will ask editor. Thanks for the review bro.

3yr