Review Detail of Baraka_Mugu_0263 in The World Cataclysm

its a good story great characters their development is fine but for a character who went back in time the personality development is bullcrap, bullshit and detrimental to the plot since his has a preservative personality which would get him killed in the long run as he is very decisive in his actions from the current way its going I expect him to be betrayed and thrown to the gutter like a used condom which is bad the other characters are a little bit shaky in their development as the are in an apocalyptic world where its survival of the fittest i recommend you read the novel [i was born in hell] as an idea source to hell since it a good read on an apocalypse novel where the main character goes back in time to when the apocalypse started and due to surviving in it for a few decades where he was able to learn of the cruelty of the human race all its bad sides like selfishness the back stabing nature the schemes the lying the hatred the horror the gore and the lengths one would go to survive as their life depended on it for theirs survival hence surviving all that led to the cold manipulating killing nature which is suitable for the mc to survive but yours is a bit crappy like bullshit which is bad for the world background would develop to the point where the mc would be controlled by the other characters [img=faceslap]