Review Detail of docaqui in THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS

Writing Quality: 4/5 Reason: some verbs were missing but the message is there.. I hope the author would have some less punctuation marks next time. Stability of the Updates: 5/5 Reason: the updates of the chapters were constant and the author did not disappoint with each chap. Story Development: 5/5 Reason: I've only read the first chap but I am already hooked and the story is already right down the middle but the flow is never ruined or anything. Character Design: 4/5 Reason: it is not clear what the characters look like from the first chapter.. I think a little bit of description of the MC would do the trick. World Background: 5/5 Reason: It is quite similar to Avatar but it is still unique in the sense of the author writes the whole plot. Overall, I think the little issue here is the sentence structure but nonetheless, it is a fun book to read.