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Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor4yr
2021-01-17 22:34

Alright my third iteration lol, This novel is not the usual run of the mill cultivation novel you see out there. MC won't just blindly slaughter or save every dog and chickens he sees on the road lol. Pros - 1. A collected, mature(not beta) and playful MC who is not too cold that his face looks like a frozen block of ice without any expressions despite his tragic past. 2. Interesting and entertaining story and plot lines that would keep you guys on edge and want to read more. The plot won't be simply about leveling up and jumping to higher realms like other novels but there would be gripping, dramatic and heart wrenching events. 3. MC's girls won't be two dimensional nor would they be left behind and forgotten. They each play a important role in the story. The Romance has and will be well fleshed out unlike usual novels where MC simply chances upon a beauty and insta meet and have snu-snu. 4. The world building has been structured properly and the power levels explained(glossary also included). MC's powers are intriguing(Necromancy included oops spoiler) and not cliched. It would be fun for you guys to see how he is going to use them. 5. I think the writing quality is at least satisfactory that won't bore holes in one's brain. Till at most Chap 80, there might be elementary mistakes and small grammatical mistakes, but trust me I will edit it as soon as I get the time. First time writing so can't help it. Cons - 1. Please somehow hold on till chap 20 as I feel like I might have tried to convey the information in a poor way. Maybe some might not feel that way but for those who does, I can say that you won't regret if u read on after chap 40. 2. The story might seem like a slow start since I wanted to build up the world first and convey it to readers. Maybe this might not have been the best way but it does pick up pace from chap 50 onwards. Again this depends on one's perspective while some might feel the pace is fine. 3. I don't know if this is a con or what...but some might feel the mysteries are too annoying or something like that. But please be patient as they are revealed along with the plot and you guys won't regret reading further. Where's the fun if all the mysteries are shown to you all at the beginning of the story itself? ---- Finally, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my novel and reading it. Also, appreciate all the powerstones and support you guys are giving me :D P.S (Harem haters pls avoid this novel and don't post a review saying that you hate harem since I already mentioned it in the tags, ty)

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Nattychris_22
Nattychris_22Lv10

ErjasD
ErjasDLv13

ReF4SH
ReF4SHLv13

A great novel until now as I love harem.. I agree with the first con as I felt too much of info was thrown in the chapters at the start but considering it as your first novel it was understandable...But then again after chap 50 it becomes great so voila Author san u did a great job!

Wiseqq
WiseqqLv2

Lu_Ck
Lu_CkLv13

I really hate the mc i don't know what's wrong with him but there's something that ticks me off.

Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

lol weird

Lu_Ck:I really hate the mc i don't know what's wrong with him but there's something that ticks me off.
JOZSEF
JOZSEFLv11

Is the harem limited to 2-4? Cuz I can't barely handle 4 harem member.😅

Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

I am not really sure about the number as it depends how the plot develops.

JOZSEF:Is the harem limited to 2-4? Cuz I can't barely handle 4 harem member.😅
EREBUS
EREBUSLv4

TrinitytheApostle
TrinitytheApostleLv15

I get mad ATG vibes from your novel lol I love the novel tho keep it up

Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Yea haha the starting might seem similar but after the initial chaps, everything is totally different.

TrinitytheApostle:I get mad ATG vibes from your novel lol I love the novel tho keep it up
Anirudh7
Anirudh7Lv4

For me this is starting in more or less an identical fashion to the great demon king with minor differences in how the powers are but eerily similar inheritance, though that story was better in inheritance(given later after fleshing out story), the ending seems to be the same as well ( anti god wanted to go to diferent universe got killed by strongest guy in this universe when he was tired now he wants mc to revenge)... I genuinely hope this isnt the plot because the inheritance itself was half assed at best and gdt even used death laws properly rather than necromancy which is at best trash tier death laws(ive only read 40 chapters so i apologize if i got it wrong).

Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Well you are wrong and necromancy is the not the only thing he is at good at lol. You have yet to know his true powers(which is way more interesting) and well I don't know or read about any great demon king but the plot is not at all like you said. Hope you read ahead and see for yourself how things are not like you expected [img=recommend]

Anirudh7:For me this is starting in more or less an identical fashion to the great demon king with minor differences in how the powers are but eerily similar inheritance, though that story was better in inheritance(given later after fleshing out story), the ending seems to be the same as well ( anti god wanted to go to diferent universe got killed by strongest guy in this universe when he was tired now he wants mc to revenge)... I genuinely hope this isnt the plot because the inheritance itself was half assed at best and gdt even used death laws properly rather than necromancy which is at best trash tier death laws(ive only read 40 chapters so i apologize if i got it wrong).
Anirudh7
Anirudh7Lv4

Ofcourse will continue to read👍🏻 the only thing i hope u check out is how death laws were used in king of gods (soul+body) attack, for me that was much better than necromancy, thank you for replying👍🏻

Resurgent:Well you are wrong and necromancy is the not the only thing he is at good at lol. You have yet to know his true powers(which is way more interesting) and well I don't know or read about any great demon king but the plot is not at all like you said. Hope you read ahead and see for yourself how things are not like you expected [img=recommend]
Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Ah, don't worry, I haven't really shown the real use of death laws here. Necromancy is just the least of it. Thanks for reading [img=recommend]

Anirudh7:Ofcourse will continue to read👍🏻 the only thing i hope u check out is how death laws were used in king of gods (soul+body) attack, for me that was much better than necromancy, thank you for replying👍🏻
Triple_x
Triple_xLv10

Will the MC later become obedient? I mean he will obey if he is not allowed to kill people / his family ... because if that is the case he does not have his own stand.

UmbraV7
UmbraV7Lv4

I don't hate harems. But how most novels portray them. I really hope yours isn't the run of mill typical harem

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGoneLv5

complexsolution
complexsolutionLv12

hello, I love the plot and characters, but I think something might be wrong with MC. dunno what it is but I found mc attitude not compatible with his persona. I can't pinpoint what is it but I just feel like it. nvm I'll ignore my instinct, cause I really enjoy your novel. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work.

Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Thanks for reading. However, as you read on towards the latest chaps, I think you won't feel like that way about the MC anymore.

complexsolution:hello, I love the plot and characters, but I think something might be wrong with MC. dunno what it is but I found mc attitude not compatible with his persona. I can't pinpoint what is it but I just feel like it. nvm I'll ignore my instinct, cause I really enjoy your novel. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work.
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Scripture02
Scripture02Lv10

Currently read enough to write this review. The author did a great job in making the start enticing. Although the start is pretty slow, but hey what makes a great structure is its foundation.(pros and cons at the bottom if this is too long) I'll start with the MC. He had some dark sht past. In his past life he has been dubbed as a hero because he never killed anyone. Until he was betrayed by most of his friends whom he once protected (protected them from what? go and read the novel). He got reincarnated into a cultivation world as an adopted son of a patriarch. He also grew massive trust issue (well who wouldn't) and is now a lot more careful. If you have questions about his real family and if he cares for them, well they are not shown yet but hopefully soon(yes I am also excited for some familial fluff). The few characters that have appeared are well written. They are not flat. They are not those types who just sit on the side and cheer from what I've read. I can already see that this is not a one man army novel where the mc takes on the whole world alone. The harem is not rushed which is good. I can see that the author is planning on building a proper solid relationship with the potential harem member(s).That means r-18 will come a bit later(But Im sure author wont fail us when the time comes.). From what I said you can already guess that the romance in this novel is going to be great. The world building is amazingly done so far and has lots of potential. The mysteries being served to us are like a box full of treasures but you cant open it, it makes you want to dig into the authors brain and unveil them. I'll probably retract this review and write another one once more chapters are out. So to sum it up Pros: 1. The story is written well with its fair share of mysteries. 2. The harem is not being rushed 3. The world background is currently on its infancy but its got tons of potential 4. So far the characters that have shown up are well designed. For the development we'll have to see in the future Cons: 1. The slow start 2. Some lengthy explanations which could have been said with fewer words great novel and its worth giving a go

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