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Scripture02
Scripture02Lv104yr
2021-01-12 17:33

Currently read enough to write this review. The author did a great job in making the start enticing. Although the start is pretty slow, but hey what makes a great structure is its foundation.(pros and cons at the bottom if this is too long) I'll start with the MC. He had some dark sht past. In his past life he has been dubbed as a hero because he never killed anyone. Until he was betrayed by most of his friends whom he once protected (protected them from what? go and read the novel). He got reincarnated into a cultivation world as an adopted son of a patriarch. He also grew massive trust issue (well who wouldn't) and is now a lot more careful. If you have questions about his real family and if he cares for them, well they are not shown yet but hopefully soon(yes I am also excited for some familial fluff). The few characters that have appeared are well written. They are not flat. They are not those types who just sit on the side and cheer from what I've read. I can already see that this is not a one man army novel where the mc takes on the whole world alone. The harem is not rushed which is good. I can see that the author is planning on building a proper solid relationship with the potential harem member(s).That means r-18 will come a bit later(But Im sure author wont fail us when the time comes.). From what I said you can already guess that the romance in this novel is going to be great. The world building is amazingly done so far and has lots of potential. The mysteries being served to us are like a box full of treasures but you cant open it, it makes you want to dig into the authors brain and unveil them. I'll probably retract this review and write another one once more chapters are out. So to sum it up Pros: 1. The story is written well with its fair share of mysteries. 2. The harem is not being rushed 3. The world background is currently on its infancy but its got tons of potential 4. So far the characters that have shown up are well designed. For the development we'll have to see in the future Cons: 1. The slow start 2. Some lengthy explanations which could have been said with fewer words great novel and its worth giving a go

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Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Wew, finally another detailed review. Thanks for listing out the details in such a way...hope new readers can get more idea more this review. Thanks for the review [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LaySventi
LaySventiLv2

Thanks for the info!

fiction_bystander
fiction_bystanderLv4

I WILL NEVER EVER GONNA READ OVERLY STRETCHED EXPLANATIONS, REDUNDANT GRINDS AND INFORMATION THAT LITERALLY CAN BE EXPRESS WITH SIMPLE AND SHORT WORDS. You're wasting your money and time.

Scripture02
Scripture02Lv10

No time and money were wasted in writing this review. Also, I’m sorry. I didn’t know I was solely writing this review for you.

fiction_bystander:I WILL NEVER EVER GONNA READ OVERLY STRETCHED EXPLANATIONS, REDUNDANT GRINDS AND INFORMATION THAT LITERALLY CAN BE EXPRESS WITH SIMPLE AND SHORT WORDS. You're wasting your money and time.
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

his late wife and unborn child, are there any chance for them to reunie again?

MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

reunite

MILARCH:his late wife and unborn child, are there any chance for them to reunie again?
Scripture02
Scripture02Lv10

The wife, its close to a 100% as for the unborn child, I have no idea.

MILARCH:his late wife and unborn child, are there any chance for them to reunie again?
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

thank you

Scripture02:The wife, its close to a 100% as for the unborn child, I have no idea.
GearOne
GearOneLv15

thanks for the info

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv15

how far into story does it get better? even at chapter 14 it's still really depressing and it seems like there is no real hope for the MC to grow stronger.

Scripture02:The wife, its close to a 100% as for the unborn child, I have no idea.
Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv3

He get thrashed here and there.. and has massive plot armour..and simp

MILARCH:his late wife and unborn child, are there any chance for them to reunie again?
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

haha its been a year. thank you.

Man_of_culture_69:He get thrashed here and there.. and has massive plot armour..and simp
Funmilola_85
Funmilola_85Lv4

Where are you now? What have you written so far? You sure think you are relevant. mtcheeew. It's been a year since your senseless review that lacks not even an iota of intelligence. Guess what? The book is doing pretty well. Not because people don't know where to put their money but because it is a very good book. It is so good, waiting for new chapters is a pain.

fiction_bystander:I WILL NEVER EVER GONNA READ OVERLY STRETCHED EXPLANATIONS, REDUNDANT GRINDS AND INFORMATION THAT LITERALLY CAN BE EXPRESS WITH SIMPLE AND SHORT WORDS. You're wasting your money and time.
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Resurgent
ResurgentAuthor

Alright my third iteration lol, This novel is not the usual run of the mill cultivation novel you see out there. MC won't just blindly slaughter or save every dog and chickens he sees on the road lol. Pros - 1. A collected, mature(not beta) and playful MC who is not too cold that his face looks like a frozen block of ice without any expressions despite his tragic past. 2. Interesting and entertaining story and plot lines that would keep you guys on edge and want to read more. The plot won't be simply about leveling up and jumping to higher realms like other novels but there would be gripping, dramatic and heart wrenching events. 3. MC's girls won't be two dimensional nor would they be left behind and forgotten. They each play a important role in the story. The Romance has and will be well fleshed out unlike usual novels where MC simply chances upon a beauty and insta meet and have snu-snu. 4. The world building has been structured properly and the power levels explained(glossary also included). MC's powers are intriguing(Necromancy included oops spoiler) and not cliched. It would be fun for you guys to see how he is going to use them. 5. I think the writing quality is at least satisfactory that won't bore holes in one's brain. Till at most Chap 80, there might be elementary mistakes and small grammatical mistakes, but trust me I will edit it as soon as I get the time. First time writing so can't help it. Cons - 1. Please somehow hold on till chap 20 as I feel like I might have tried to convey the information in a poor way. Maybe some might not feel that way but for those who does, I can say that you won't regret if u read on after chap 40. 2. The story might seem like a slow start since I wanted to build up the world first and convey it to readers. Maybe this might not have been the best way but it does pick up pace from chap 50 onwards. Again this depends on one's perspective while some might feel the pace is fine. 3. I don't know if this is a con or what...but some might feel the mysteries are too annoying or something like that. But please be patient as they are revealed along with the plot and you guys won't regret reading further. Where's the fun if all the mysteries are shown to you all at the beginning of the story itself? ---- Finally, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my novel and reading it. Also, appreciate all the powerstones and support you guys are giving me :D P.S (Harem haters pls avoid this novel and don't post a review saying that you hate harem since I already mentioned it in the tags, ty)

TheAmbrosius
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