Hello! Editor here! I'm simply here to explain how our story works. First of all, there are character changing scenes. What I mean by that is we change characters in some scenes, while it's Ryuu in one scene we might need to change the story's perspective to Hiroshi or Lezlie or even other characters. That allows us to make our story much better and simpler to tell. Second of all, there is place changing. And what I mean by that is there is place changing scenes, when that happens environment and the characters changes. We have to do that to introduce the other places of our world and our other characters. Thank you for reading and supporting our story! Have a good day! (And also the MC is Ryuu.)
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LIKEI hate things like harem, ecchi and etc. Trust me I will never let the writer put those things in the story, neither he wants to do it. So you can read it. Have a peaceful day reading.
the story have a strong plot but the stile of writing make it difficult to keep the paste of the story so it would be nice if you as the editor correct that . ps I know your novel don't have much readers but if you manage to correct the paste to make it easier for the reader to engage ,I bet your novel would eventually gain a lot of readers just don't give up and don't lose hope