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Byakko22

Byakko22

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2018-08-28 JoinedEcuador
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  • Byakko22
    Byakko227 months ago
    Posted

    the novel starts well but as soon as you pass the first 20 to 30 chapter the author starts to forget plots, Skip parts only to try to advance the story change settings and around chapter 650 more or less Start to stole the plot of swallowed star almost completely so in my opinion the novel is not worth reading

  • Byakko22
    Byakko222 years ago
    Posted

    the novel start great I really love as the story progress the mc personality become a mess and not in the good sense he keep losing his morals to the point to comit numerous war crimes even in his own family to the just to advance in his career at one point I didn't know if I was following the same mc so in my point of view this story start great but the cuality slowly star to loose quality to the point it get tired of the same ( the mc whant to do something he stump anything to get it even if that means sacrificing his family)

  • Byakko22
    Byakko222 years ago
    Replied to LuoYeYouLing

    I was one of the first to read the novel when it came out so the fact I'm still waiting despite the inconsistency in the release if chapter and the long time it take you to write one that means you are good and it is worth the wait so please dont give up because you are good and continue not mater if you get only one follower

  • Byakko22
    Byakko222 years ago
    Replied to LuoYeYouLing

    I love this novel but the last chapter was 9 months ago so I like to know if the novel was drop or you are going to release a bundle of chapters at some point in time

  • Byakko22
    Byakko222 years ago
    Posted

    it is a shame the author never finish the novel it's been 9 months since the last chapter and this novel have real potential the only thing I have complains is the synopsis because the mc isn't a normal weak coward human like the synopsis said

  • Byakko22
    Byakko222 years ago
    Replied to Camoblast

    yea but his convenient luck is one of the the main plots in the novel it was explained like he has the same or more luck than white that's why he always obtain what he needs the only problem is that the reward he obtained are proportional to the danger he face so basically he is stuck in hell mode for everything he does

  • Byakko22
    Byakko222 years ago
    Posted

    the novel is a bit generic but it isn't boring the main problem is that the novel is incomplete . at the end of the novel the mc defeat the boss of that ark and in the next chapter there is an epilogue that dont make any sense and more that 70% of the plot are never explain correctly

  • Byakko22
    Byakko222 years ago
    Replied to Rafian

    then how can you said the author and the mc have brain damage of you dont know the novel PD: you shouldn't make a review if you dont have the capacity to understand the subtexts in the novels

  • Byakko22
    Byakko223 years ago
    Replied to Shiveringjenny

    I have read some novels in MTL with different degrees of successes there Is this novel call the highest bounty that translate well in MTL but they are others like apocalypse meltdown that one can barely understand if stop enjoying the novel and start to pice together the correct grammar to make it readable

  • Byakko22
    Byakko223 years ago
    Replied to Shiveringjenny

    and could you pass me the link of the page you use for the MTL