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Review Detail of ONGFRFR in Naruto: Time control

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ONGFRFR
ONGFRFRLv43yrONGFRFR

the story is fine but PICK A NAME AND STICK WITH IT STOP CHANGING IT EVERY SENTENCE. if i could i would give a negitive for Character Design just for the name swapping.

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Naruto: Time control

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WinnieLePooh
WinnieLePoohLv13WinnieLePooh

Fucking erase, then yeruashi, then yweresh?

McRead
McReadLv5McRead

That actually sounds familiar as if I read exactly those names in another fanfic not long ago...

WinnieLePooh:Fucking erase, then yeruashi, then yweresh?
Abarajas5736
Abarajas5736Lv1Abarajas5736

Okay i honestly havent read your story completely but i read two that have the same title and summary from different authors. i just wanted to warn yOu that someone is copying your story but there are some changes. i posted this in all of the reviews for each story because i dont Know the original creator. if you read this thank you.

AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5AzureConqueror

I know you're trying to be a nice guy but the author admitted he's translating the novel, so its not his. And fact of the matter is, that mtlnovel and comrademao have a more readable version than this

Abarajas5736:Okay i honestly havent read your story completely but i read two that have the same title and summary from different authors. i just wanted to warn yOu that someone is copying your story but there are some changes. i posted this in all of the reviews for each story because i dont Know the original creator. if you read this thank you.
BlackholeSama
BlackholeSamaLv3BlackholeSama

it was yuroichi once too xD

WinnieLePooh:Fucking erase, then yeruashi, then yweresh?
18484746
18484746Lv418484746

Bro og

Taugh
TaughLv1Taugh

Actually is it even his story? There are some authors that went up to volume 6. While this is stil 1st one and not even finished

Abarajas5736:Okay i honestly havent read your story completely but i read two that have the same title and summary from different authors. i just wanted to warn yOu that someone is copying your story but there are some changes. i posted this in all of the reviews for each story because i dont Know the original creator. if you read this thank you.