Review Detail of UsernamePending in The Elderwood Guardian

Read to chapter 4. I really enjoyed reading this story. It has a very catchy first few chapters. The characters are well written - the protagonists have life and humor in them, whilst upon meeting the first antagonists, I immediately wanted to murder them - a sign of good writing. The story is unfolding at a good pace, not too rushed or too slow. I really like how the author slowly builds the world by incorporating information through the story. He (I think its a he) didn't throw all of the information The only problem is a bit of the writing. There are some mistakes in the grammar and some unclear phrases, but in general, the writing mistakes did not interfere with my reading. Nice story, would recommend. I am waiting for more.