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    UsernamePending3yr
    Replied to shinu316

    If it exists, you can pick it up.

    "Pick up everything!
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    Picking Up Attributes From Today
    Eastern · Panda Reunion
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    UsernamePending3yr
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    He's probably going to face this guy.

    Ch 10 To Be Young Again
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    The Elderwood Guardian
    Fantasy · NuttyDinosaur
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    UsernamePending3yr
    Replied to TagDaReaper

    You're right. Fixed.

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    altalt
    The Lucky Dungeon Diver
    Fantasy · UsernamePending
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    UsernamePending3yr
    Replied to NuttyDinosaur

    Will keep in mind!

    [Alright. 2 tier 2 stones for 20 points. 1 tier 1 grade recovery potion and 1 tier 1 stamina potion, 10 points each.]
    altalt
    The Lucky Dungeon Diver
    Fantasy · UsernamePending
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    UsernamePending3yr
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    Read to chapter 4. I really enjoyed reading this story. It has a very catchy first few chapters. The characters are well written - the protagonists have life and humor in them, whilst upon meeting the first antagonists, I immediately wanted to murder them - a sign of good writing. The story is unfolding at a good pace, not too rushed or too slow. I really like how the author slowly builds the world by incorporating information through the story. He (I think its a he) didn't throw all of the information The only problem is a bit of the writing. There are some mistakes in the grammar and some unclear phrases, but in general, the writing mistakes did not interfere with my reading. Nice story, would recommend. I am waiting for more.

    altalt
    The Elderwood Guardian
    Fantasy · NuttyDinosaur
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    UsernamePending3yr
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    Excellent novel. It is, as the author has said, a bit slow paced at the start, yet picks up quite quickly. The characters are each unique and engaging, and the writing is very smooth - I had no difficulties in reading this novel at all. The idea of the MC being a loner and eventually having his ideas about morality skewed was very interesting and also well executed. Unfortunately, I had to dock a point in world background because of the huge information dump at the beginning of the story. Still, a wonderful story overall. Would definitely recommend.

    altalt
    Shades of the New World
    Fantasy · NakedApron
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    UsernamePending3yr
    Replied to Novagaming

    Thank you so much!

    Ch 13 Advice from Mike
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    The Lucky Dungeon Diver
    Fantasy · UsernamePending
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    UsernamePending3yr
    Replied to RoeDear

    I have an idea similar to that, lol. You'll have to wait just a little bit to find out :) .

    Ch 10 1st Floor Cleared!
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    The Lucky Dungeon Diver
    Fantasy · UsernamePending
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