Review Detail of always_tired_ in . (dropped)

well, it was decent I guess. the characters don't act their personalities. grammar is somewhat bad. MC is a named NPC and has high stats and skills despite being only age 14. He also acts pretty dumbly most of the time. The concept was interesting but I just can't take it seriously due to mc's personality(if there is even any) as well as convenient developments. I would give it 2 stars but giving 4 just to encourage the author. keep up the work. I would only say to reduce the plot armor of the Mc by a little and you might need to read Overgeared again so that the characters act their personality completely. As for writing, structuring gets better with time but do try to pay attention to tenses.